Splatters of Poetry: purposely untitled

Saturday, March 04, 2006

and
your
silence
cracks
my
veins
like
ice
but
my
silence
brings
you
peace

At 6:44 AM, shine.is.dead said...: I like... but if this is supposed to be a "word sonnet" its missing one word.
At 10:32 AM, Erin said...: oooh. sonnet = 14 lines. I had no idea. I guess you learn something new everyday.
At 6:52 AM, Erin said...: i could have had 13 lines...but then it's not a sonnet.
At 7:33 PM, JnR said...: all this 'sonnet' talk has made me feel Very inadequate as i have never written a sonnet before, nor do i intend to; i shall leave that to shakespeare, who does way better than i ever could. by the by, I Heart this poem. it reveals very much with very few words, it seems effortless. love you like im blind! -m