Thursday, May 24, 2007

[breathe on me] thoughts on May evenings

breathe on me
so I can
smell all of your
lilac-coloured inhalations
and lay me down
gentle
in lonely green
feilds that could
just as easily be your arms
set me to tree-music
and dance your
fireflys and cocky tulips
to all my songs
for once
in the white shadow of a
single-minded moon
exhale
perfect blue evenings
on the back of my neck
in that way you
have
of pretending your
forever
is any
more
than just
tonight

2 Comments:

At 12:43 PM, Blogger JnR said...

ilove the last couple lines; 'pretending forever is more than just tonight'

lovelovelovelovelove!!

loveyou as well, im notjust in this relationship for yourpoetry :P

 
At 7:09 PM, Blogger Erin said...

good to know, Jenn, good to know ;)

 

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