breathe deep (how we overcome)
breathe deep, my darlingthough the
_______sea is
______high and the
_______sun is
______low and the
night rises up to your neck
breathe deep through
sun-caked lips and
air-scorched lungs
breathe deep
these poison arrows
and blackened suns
breathe deep
the rotten hope
the way to overcome
_________________"but I do believe..."
posted by Erin @ 9:16 PM
1 Comments:
i love how you use 'my darling'. the endearment adds something to the poem. tinging it with something almost bittersweet. you rock my socks.
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